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Thank you juliew! That is a fantastic essay! I hate to nitpick on such a wonderful essay but shouldn't the word be affected rather than effected in the next to last paragraph? I hate to be a grammar freak but I would hate for her to lose the scholarship based on one word. I hope I have helped and not made you mad

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Julie You must be so proud of your daughter! Fabulous essay, capturing her determination and spirit in the face of such a devastating disease. The scholarship committee will surely be moved. I will keep my fingers crossed!


Carla

fantastic!

An admirable and well-written essay. By the way "effective" is correct.



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try also www.scholarshipzone.us

Thanks for sharing this. I'm going to share it with my 17 year old daughter, to get her thinking about college apps.

Julie, it's so good to see you, and that is an absolutely stunning essay...you must be SO proud